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[p3n0r in teh butt lib3rati0n <3]

Why wasnt this a normal animation! Lol

[PICONJO CONFESSION 16]

I love you picanjo.

[Piconjo Epic Kiss 25]

Lol

[Piconjo: Teh RezErektion Part 1]

Wooooooow! Lol a joke every 5 seconds and they all land! 5/5

First half was great

[Boilermaker (2018)]

Ya lol, there were so many times you could of made a great joke. Too bad!

Lol

RistoKy responds:

I Know! :D
Thank You! :)

[PICONJO CONFESSION 15: Teh P0w3r of <3]

5/5

[Modellastry (2017) a Risto Kütt Film]

Well done, but you need more practice.
If you were going for an uneasy vibe the whole thing you nailed it. I felt uneasy. I like the fact the characters are hard to recognize so i have to try to figure out what im looking at, you could of used that feeling to put something unexpected.

Maybe i didnt understand any deeper meaning in the film, but it didnt seem like there was any below the story. The face of the main charcter didnt move much, its hard to be emotional when the cahacters dont show much emotion.

Try making smaller versions until you understand the general ideas of how to write a good story, good mysic, artstyle, putting them together. Something like that. My cousin also makes films, and his. Problem is that he is too anxious in life and that stops him from living freely: which stops him from thinking deeply and understanding deeply, feeling deeply. Good advice is to have fun and live how you want. I try drugs and going out to bars, doing sports, sparring, dating women.

The story could have been more emotional, or anytging else. I dont know, its missing a lot of things. You could add a lot more meaning by putting details in the background. The story was very plain

More practice

I also felt like i was watching mr spoonfingers, i forgot the name, the animation by david firth

RistoKy responds:

Well I Truly Thank You stealthsilent! I always Love a Good Constructive Criticism!

The Uneasy Vibe was Intentional! & since It was my First Indie-Film straight after my MA Animation studies, so the crappiness & plainness of it is justified :D Cause' I was still growing & developing @ that time as a Film Maker.
The deep meaning got lost indeed, cause' It was Intended to be Obscure & Nonsense like Fashion is & can be.
So if you want to see something else, then watch my 2018 "Boilermaker", see if that's a different kind of soup.

& More practice always come handy! :)

I Thank You!
All the Best! :)

[Don't tattle on me! | Animation meme (TW FW gore, war, disasters)]

Yourr morr talented than me

[Calvin & Hobbes Slow-Motion Tackle]

Great job!

[Sagat vs Katy Perry]

omg lol so stupid